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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Odious cruel-hearted principal's office As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: know-it-all amber filthpig "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Anal persian famous landscape painting they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Lascivious travel guidebook headpube Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: bearded crystalline masturbator As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Unholy Goal In Life Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Beta mustard theater stage blood rage “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Odious cruel-hearted principal's office i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Beta mustard theater stage blood rage Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Odious cruel-hearted principal's office C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: know-it-all amber filthpig "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Anal persian famous landscape painting Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Beta mustard theater stage blood rage Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Anal persian famous landscape painting You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Talented plaza While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: seedy police squad hissy fit As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: slap-happy bearded chad This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: crusty piazza coffee pot Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Internet-worthy stimulating field A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376194) |
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As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Odious cruel-hearted principal's office i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: gay floppy den crotch As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Odious cruel-hearted principal's office doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: gay floppy den crotch it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
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As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Jet hospital you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: hilarious main people Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: pontificating private investor A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Autistic gaping clown two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Exhilarant faggot firefighter C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Jade Crackhouse As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: silver giraffe hell Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: slap-happy bearded chad You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: lake flickering queen of the night Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: lake flickering queen of the night A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: aphrodisiac dun athletic conference andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Misanthropic sanctuary Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: Jet hospital A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#42379691) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: 180 disgusting native As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#44008916) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: tubby spastic 11yo playing in toddler section Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2#49827228) |
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